Friday, July 22, 2011

Is my plot really boring? Please help?

My plot is simple yet soapieish. Vicki divorced alexi after catching the maid "cleaning" his lap with...her mouth. Now she's trying to date again with minimal success...But it's hard for a middle aged divorcee with 6 kids. She attracts doctors, lawyers, hotdog salesmen and mimes. Katy who is her oldest daughter got drunk and slept with hunter who is allie's husband...they are sisters. Now katy is pregnant and isnt sure if him or her friend danny is the father. Hunter raped seraphina and she passed her baby off as eric's to protect allie. Alexi is engaged to rosa...who secretly is a golddigger and is of course cheating with hunter. Vicki slept with alexi one last time and had baby julia rose. She wont tell alexi about her out of spite. Alexi had just realized that vicki is the only woman he will ever love...she wont take him back...the pain is too much. What should i name this book? Is it any good? Is there anything i should change? Is it too soap opera-ish? Any suggestions are welcome. Xoxo

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